https://thethepoetry.com/2014/03/poem-of-the-week-loren-kleinman-2/ Where was it one first heard of the truth? Mon, 02 Jun 2014 00:21:31 +0000 hourly 1 https://thethepoetry.com/2014/03/poem-of-the-week-loren-kleinman-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1931 Wed, 26 Mar 2014 14:12:00 +0000 https://thethepoetry.com/?p=8066#comment-1931 Really powerful writing. I love the simplicity of the language–it’s raw, vivid, and approachable.

]]> https://thethepoetry.com/2014/03/poem-of-the-week-loren-kleinman-2/comment-page-1/#comment-1929 Tue, 25 Mar 2014 02:10:00 +0000 https://thethepoetry.com/?p=8066#comment-1929 You got me with this one the moment you straddled the curb. A raw experience but with a vagrant’s discipline, finding the right spots to lie down and light up. You lost me just a little bit after you became your own country, guttering out in short sentences, the vagrant’s shuffle, I suppose, but leaving me feeling a bit disconnected from your meaning. But I am old fashioned. I would have rung your mum and told her to come and collect you.

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